Another slightly shorter and fatter Kai with purplish skin stands behind him. "Its not just your problem, we all have to deal with it but I never complain. No matter how many are killed there is always a stronger evil somewhere. As soon as North galaxy is all gone somebody one of mine'll handle it."

The next rock the saiyan touches down on isn't instantly shattered. Instead he flies around the planet aimlessly. The black Earth under him leads to a transparent grey see full of all sorts of strange and beautiful life forms, which the Sayain begins bombarding with ki blasts. "Ha ha ha. DIE! ha ha" He destroys small islands and eventually comes upon a city floating in the grey sea.

He lands in the city which is filled with strange small silver metallic creatures, possibly intelligent life. They have two arms like people but multiple legs. They all stop their many tasks looking at the strange new comer. "So ugly..." The Broly look alike grabs one of them and begins beating the crap out of it, the others try to help their friend but are knock to the side easily.

King Kai still watches all this happen, "and there is no point to it, it makes no sense to just break everything you find" The purple Kai behind him nods his head.

By Now the Saiyan has destroyed half of the dark planet and has attracted the military wich is powerless to stop him. "In then end garbage is..." An explosion lights up space for about five minutes then sizzles out. The Saiyan continues flying through the endless void. "No one can really fight me. Pathetic!" He shoots several ki blasts from his protective bubble then quickly flies away as a star goes super Nova.

On Earth the Z team is still together though they've moved to Master Roshi's little island now. Krillon and Goku are grilling hotdogs, burgers and ribs, while Pan spars with Trunks, and everyone else is inside the Kameh house crammed on the couch watching TV while Master Roshi is on the toilet looking at aerobics magazines. Vegeta is being anti social sitting on the roof looking mad not looking at anybody.

Krillon from two seperate charcoal grills Goku and Krillon are putting the done pieces in a pot but Goku's eating half of his brots instead. "Can’t you wait?" The Krillon wonders why he even asked. There is a breaking news story on the tv inside. "The new born star known as poogas has recently exploded. Astronomers have no explanation"

Videl is outside the bathroom knocking on the door for Master Roshi so get out. "Hold on!" "Come on you've been..." “If you can't hold it you can go in the ocean.”

Everyone suddenly hears a voice in their heads."You guys I got bad news, your fun is done" "Hey king Kai "Goku says out loud. "Look there is a Phycotic Super Sayain coming Earth." What Broly's back again?" Gohan interrupts. "NO, he looks alittle like Broly but he's much worse. He's stronger than all of you" Goku and Vegeta both start to get really excited.

"I can't wait where is he? I'm taking this one, Kakarot" "Stop that! Your only hope of surviving is if you all find a fusion partner RIGHT NOW" "Why waste such an opponent" Vegeta argues. "Look" King Kai answers "I don't know how strong this guy is but I can tell you he' in a league above anything you've faced and is as crazy as any one you knew."

Since everyone is talking to King Kai nobody notices Broly fell back to Earth in the same spot Gogeta blasted him off. As he lays there passed out he gets found by the last person you'd expect, Hercule! He stated checking on Broly waking him up having no idea what he was doing.

"I just happened to be revisiting the spot where I saved Earth from the monster Cell, he was about nine no nineteen feet tall and used a bunch of explosion tricks but I just walked up to him and chop, you remember that right" Broly look back at Hercule confused "I can't remember anything except something hitting my head." Hercule was thinking in his head (Poor skinny kid he doesn't even realize he was saved by the world savior) "Can you remember anything else beside that and your name? Think hard"

Later Hercule had showed Broly his dojo. Hercule laughed as his stundents were practicing their form. "Broly I'm giving you free lessons. I'm gonna make you into fighting machine so next time some one jumps you they'll have a coma. Broly just stares at everyone as they work out then gets an evil smile. "They need work, let me fight someone" Hercule looks at him surprised. "You sure? Ok you can start with the white belts."

About ten minutes later Hercule's dojo is litered with bodies and people are who weren't beaten by him just look on in awe. Hercule was thinking (He's so strong to be that slim) then he got an idea. "Everyone this is my new ultimately strong Successor Broly" Broly looked confused again but didn't argue.

"Maybe I'm too old to still be the World Champion but he is going to continue my legacy of dominance. Broly, would you be willing to enter the world tournament? Be warned you would be facing the greatest warriors alive today" Broly got excited thinking about it.

Back at the Roshi's island Most every one was out side on the beach eating barbeque. As usual Goku had already cleaned ten plates and Krillon had brought him more. Vegeta had flew off some where and 18 was still inside watching TV cause androids don't eat. Videl had finally gotten in the bath room and Roshi came and sat next to 18.

The news was still on and it showed Hercule announcing Broly as his undefeatable disciple and that he was guaranteed to win the world tournament. 18 looked disgusted at Hercule. "That tall guy kinda looks familiar I can't remember where I saw him" Roshi said. "I’m thinking I'll enter just to shut Hercule up" 18 said not hearing him.

"So gramps are you worried about what that weird guy" said Pan asked Goku who answered with his mouth full "Not really I can't even feel a power level out there. What ever he's talking about isn't even close to us.

King Kai paced back and forth on grand kai's rock nervously. "They just don't get it, the Sayains think it’s just another game they should realize what one of their own could do! The people of Marcap maybe our best hope." He tracked the Super Sayain's movements as he entered the atmosphere of Marcap, a planet 5 times larger than Earth. A well built rough red skinned figure watched the sky as waiting for the enemy. "Don't worry about it Kai we can take him"

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The Sayain flattens all in his path but more warriors keep coming at him from all sides. "Worms, I'm beyond all your nightmares!" Planet Marcap is destroyed like those worlds before it. King Kai looks real depressed and pouts "They could have won with more help but Goku is still too far away for instant transmission."

Registration for the World Martial Art tournament is underway. For the 400th anniversary of the event the tournament is in a different location, the old Red Ribbon Army base! The announcer explains that "The Red Ribbon Army almost took over the world; they also created the monster known as Cell, where else than their fortress to decide the world's Strongest?

18 was in Hercule's face but he didn't back down like he usually does. "My superiorly strong protégé won't go easy on you like I did." Broly stood behind Hercule quiet starring off into space. Goku, Trunks, Vegeta and Pan were also in line to sign up and the rest of the Z team were sitting in the stands set up around the base. The first coming matches were Trunks vs Goku Pan vs Vegeta, 18 vs Sharpener, and Hercule's best student vs Armando Alejandro Estrada. "Let the first match begin!" Broly looked on as Goku and Trunks entered the ring. "Kakarot!?"

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The announcer raised Goku's hand for the victory but was cut short when Broly jumped into the arena. Hercule ran in front of him trying to hold him back. "Kakarot I'll kill you, I'll spill your blood I'll make you suffer." "What are you talking about? Broly calm down" Hercule tried to plead with him but it was pretty useless.

Broly powered up and got buff knocking his Hercule away. Vegeta flew from back stage and Gohan flew from the stands. Broly found himself surrounded by Vegeta, Gohan, Pan and Trunks who had recovered from his match but he smiled as his hair turned gold and eyes whited out.

Goku was still trying to figure out how Hercule would even know Broly, the other fighters attacked but a bright white light shined around Broly and stoped them all in their

tracks. Several thousand ki blast shot from his body in all directions but they all homed in on Goku, Vegeta and other fighters who were endlessly bombarded untill Broly stopped. His opponents laid motionless in around him as Broly powered up more causing the Army base to collapse and the fans to run out of the stands.

# 18 flew over by the rest of the Z team as they exited. "I knew I saw him before, that's Broccoli" "Why don't you and Krillon go help?" Bulma yelled. Broly stomped on Goku and formed a huge death ball over his head when Hercule hit him in the back. Broly didn't flinch "Like smashing bugs" Hercule kept hitting Broly though getting his attention and making him stop forming his death ball. "Hercule... KAKAROT" Broly made a huge blaster shell but then stopped again. He grabbed his head fighting with himself reapeating Kakarot and Hercule then powered down to his normal self breathing hard.

Vegeta got up and flew to punch Broly but Goku caught his foot. "I think Hercule's got it under control.” “Kakarot don’t be stupid” Vegeta tried to attack again but Goku easily held him still. Broly powered up again. “Kakarot I’ll destroy you he charged and smacked Vegeta into a wall. Vegeta came back at him going SS2 and Broly going into his legendary form. They traded punches and kicks until Hercule called out “Broly!” and Broly backed off and powered down again. Trunks was up now and so was Pan. “So how did this all happen?” Trunks asked. Vegeta was mad but eventually powered down too. "Can we talk this out over dinner? I'm starved." Goku's stomache begins making noises.

Later at a buffet Goku's is pigging out while Vegeta glares at him across the table. "Kakakrot we can't let him live" "Do you know how to kill him Vegeta? He's come back four times now." "I counted three and thats supposed to be the charm." "Go ahead and try then" Goku gets up for more and Vegeta follows him. "He's not stable" "They said the same thing about you Vegeta. Krillon could have cut you to pieces."

Gohan and Trunks are sitting with Broly and Hercule, Broly's pretty calm and bored until he sees Goku walk by. Then he starts foaming at the mouth and restlessly gripps his chair. Gohan looks at Broly as he turns rabid "So even with all timers he hates my dad." I never understood why he has the obsession with my dad, even Vegeta wasn't this bad. Hercule patting Broly's shoulder makes his rabies go away. Vegeta who was following Goku stops at their table. "Broly and Kakarot were born on the same day. Kakarot was the only one to ever make Broly cry. How that lead to insanity is beyond me"

The sun is setting as Trunks, Broly, Gohan, Vegeta, Goku and Hercule are all tossed out of the buffet by an angry Chinese waitress. "You eat too much! You go up 30 times, we can only afford you go twice! Take your fortune cookies and leave! Don't come back!" Everyone soon forgets this though and start looking toward the sky, except Hercule who's clueless. "Whats happening what are you looking at?"

But he soon sees a flaming meteor flying through the sky over them." Broly screams unleashing shock waves that blow everyone back. He then flies up and hyper drives after the UFO. Gohan looks after him. "That’s the same way Broly came here" Vegeta smirks. "Finally the Super Sayain shows up, feel that power clown? Vegeta sees Goku has disappeared.

The meteor crashes into the grassy area where Gogeta fought Broly. The sun has fully set as The Super Saiyan emerges from the impact crater and sees Broly land in front of him. "Oh this is different, it's a puny version of myself I'll kill you slowly." Broly stared back at him blankly "You are?" His twin answered "I've been called monster but I like Nightmare better." Broly laughs a little "Nightmare? They called me the Devil"

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'Nightmare' is putting the finishing touches on Broly when swallowed by Goku's Kamehameha wave. "Please tell me you have more power than that" Nightmar taunts "Kakarot get away I'll told you he's MINE!" Nightmare shoots a blast at Goku but he disappears before it hits him. Goku reappears in front of Vegeta and they both play rock paper scissors. First they both choose paper, then both choose scissors, then rock, then two rocks again.

"Theses idiots, Nightmare flies at Goku and Vegeta but they manage to get out of the way and both kick him. Their kicks have no effect and Goku flies down to Earth followed by Nightmare. "Ok I'll show you my true power" says Goku. A battle of screaming begins. Vegeta floats above them p!$$ed "Kakarot I told you..." He starts powering up too.

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Nightmare is still standing after the Big Bang Kamehameha. Gogeta smiles though knowing that the Nightmare tried to go behind him and kicks the large Saiyan away. "At least this Broly knows how to after image but it's still a useless trick." The Nightmare powers up a giant death ball but Gogeta blows it up before he can throw it. Gogeta flies in and slaps him in the face. Nightmare tries to hit back but Gogeta's too fast and back hands him then lands a spin kick that Knocks Nightmare across the horizon.

Gogeta smiles as he flies off in pursuit. Nightmare lands in an ocean and Gogeta dives in after him. Nightmare shoots a blast at Gogeta but He catches it then makes it about ten times bigger and shoots it back Nightmare dodges but the blast comes back and hits hit out of the water with Gogeta following close. Night mare flees to a rock cliff then urn around to punch Gogeta but Gogeta ducks in and punches right through Nightmare's stomach. He hovers back wards as the massive warrior coughs up blood.

"Why was the Kai worried about you I can't remember having an easier fight." The nightmare is enraged but just spits up more blood. Gogeta then shoots a blast blowing off his left leg. As his enemy cries in pain he begins his ultimate move. "Ok I'm still hungry I'm ending this Big Bang Ka Me Ha Me Ha!" There is a puff of smoke and Goku and Vegeta are now hovering in front of the wounded Nightmare. Goku looks a little worried "Oops" “D@nm!T now he'll be too easy to kill no more of those stupid fusion dances" Vegeta grumbles.

They notice the Nightmares gut wound closes up and his leg is regenerating. "No" Goku turns Super Sayain 4. Vegeta hold Goku back with one arm though. "Stay out of my way Super Saiyan 4 is way too much, he's still weakened." Vegta doesn't even transform as he flies down to face Nightmare, SS4 Goku follows.

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Goku is knocked out and Nightmare holds Vegeta by the neck who's also about to pass out. "You're weak just like all the other garbage I've taken out, but I like that dance trick of yours. Bring that guy back I want to fight him" Vegeta weakly answers "I don't want to and I can't for another thirty minutes." Nightmare drops him disappointed. "To pay him back for that humiliation I'll give you this." Nightmare flies into the sky in mere second creates a Death ball that can be see from space."

He throws it down into the ocean then flies back to Vegeta. "You have seven days to bring him back and find me, if you don't, this little wet rock will explode. I'll feeling generous so I'll give you ths too. A bright light red flashes from his body lighting up the whole night sky and before Vegat stand the rubbery Pink Super Buu and the Shadow Dragon, Omega Shenron. Vegeta weakly sits up in horror. "Nobody's can do that they weren't even in the other world how?" His thoughts race(did he do this to Uub and the dragon balls?)

Super Buu grabs Vegeta and absorbs him into his body before he can say anything else, he then goes and absorbs Goku. Omega stands their looking around puzzled, he doesn't know how he got their either, Buu just doesn't care and dives into the ocean swimming away. Nightmare also leaves flying back into space.

King Kai fell over shocked. The other Kai tells him "Be happy he didn't kill them all , your galaxy might have some hope." He walks away calling for somebody named Pikkon.

Above the Grand Kai's planet the supreme Kai is also speechless. The older Kai who lives on the planet with him asks" Whats wrong with you?" "Majin Buu! I can feel his power, on Earth." he answers. Old kai searches his pockets and finds a crystal ball which shows Super Buu turning a whale into butter scotch candy. This planet is always about on the verge of destruction. Goku must be a curse of some kind. It is weird though I can show you Uub right here"

"Huh who's Uub?" The Supreme Kai asks. "Never mind I know who did this it was Coli the Legendary Super Saiyan. He was always bringing back things from the dead and stuff." "Who's Coli" Asked Supreme Kai. "A legenadary Super Saiyan. One is born every thousand years or so. We Kais always had to put them down before they could cause too much damage. Their hard to kill though, they'll come back if you don't destroy them entirely, body and soul. Looks like we messed up on Coli though and now he’s too strong to handle. You might need to go give Goku some of my fusion rings."

The Supreme Kai was still not getting it "How did he bring back Buu though?" Coli can bring fears to life, a disgusting little thing he does, he likes to call himself Nightmare. Oh look Omega's back too Earth done fore, they'll only last as long as Coli keeps them alive but they'll have plenty of time to run amuck those two. He thought in his head(Goku must be worried about Uub turning evil and more Shadow Dragons coming if he makes more wishes with the dragon balls)"

Red dawn was rising now and the Z team had gathered back at Roshi's island. Gohan and Trunks were the onl ones out side standing gaurd. "Trunks" Gohan said I can't feel Broly, my dad, Vegeta or that guy they were fighting, but all their power levels were relly weak earlier. Who do you think won?" Trunks looked disturbed "I can't sense any of them either but I think I feel Buu. It's really faint but he's here." "What thats not possible. Trunks, I think you need some sleep."

A huge wave crashed on the island and Super Buu flew over head. "See I told you." Trunks bragged. Gohan flew after Buu. Trunks was about to follow but Gohan told him to stay behind. "You need to watch our family this is personal." "Gohan you can't even turn super saiyan what makes you think you can beat Buu?" Trunks argued. "Last time I beat him just fine wih out transforming." Gohan took off leaving Trunks behind.

Ghan flew up on Buu but the pink bubble gum man turned on the hyper drive and left him behind. Gohan tried to keep up but got tired and fell to the ground. "I promise to never slack off again". The Sun was now over head. Super Buu landed on top of a mountain and called out. "Once again the most powerful being in the universe has come back to EARTH!" He thought to himeself(I'm hungry where's that cake place again?). A bunch of tiny blue beams shot through Buus head while he was thinking though.

Inside Buu Goku and Vegeta were blasting everything. Buu appeared in front of Vegeta. I love how you too keep escaping my absorption but you should know I have unlimited power in my own head. "Vegeta you said no more fusion dances right?" Goku asked "Cause I still have some of these." He pulled some Kai earrings from his pocket. "Go ahead fuse is won't matte" Buu taunted.

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Vegeto broke apart for no reason when he was getting the upper hand. "Oh I for got those don't work well in here" Goku laughed. "Enough" Buu growled, the 'floor' Goku was stnading on started to swallow him but Buu to stop focusing on Goku and Vegeta for a problem in the outside world. Broly attacked him off guard. "Kakarot you smell like Kakarot!" Broly powered up and got buff.

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Omega Shenron was over his confusion and was currently destroying west city. He was taking his time walking through the street shooting ki blasts. Trunks flew toward west city feeling Omega's power. He was nervous but determined to beat him. This is what he had been training for.

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Broly kept stomping on Super Buu until he spit up Goku and Vegeta. He then blew Buu to peices with his blaster shell attack. Broly was temped to throw another blaster shell at Goku who was out cold with Vegeta but he then dectected a strong fighting power. "Grrr, battle the enemy" Broly flew off searching for this power. Omega Shenron was purposely raising his power to attract Broly though. "I'll have some fun before destroying this place."

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The fight between Broly and Omega Shenron lasted hours but Broly was clearly at the disadvantage. He fought hard though Shenron toyed with him until nightfall he couldn't continue and collapsed. Broly stared up and saw a full moon "It brighter than ever" he mumbled to himself weakly Gohan and Pan had came now to fight Shenron they knew they couldn't win but were that last ones that could face him. They were quickly beaten by one dragon thunder though. Omega Sheron went back to Broly but saw him standing up looking at the sky. He realized his stupid mistake but it was too late the transformation was already happening, Broly's monkey tail had grown back and turned gold.

Broly started to roar and rapidly grow in size but his face growing longer like that of a wolf. Omega Shenron charged a dark ki blast and fired it but it was completely ineffective. Lucky for him a cloud covered the moon making Broly's transformation stop. Broly did not turn back to his normal self though. "What the ***k is this?" He was looking at himself seeing red fur growing on his upper body but he soon smirked as his power began to rise dramatically. Shenron shot a whirl wind spin at him but he easily dodged it.

Broly powered up and got buff eyes glowing completely yelloe and his tail grew long and turned red. He was now a Super Sayain 4. Shenron was too slow to even touch Broly now who flew above him high into the night sky. He looked down as Omega Shenron chased him but he shot a big bast down at the dragon. Omega dodged it but when Broly's blast hit the ground a large green geyser shot up and hit Omega.

Broly then hit him with a blaster shell which sent Shenron crashing to the ground making a crater. Broly kept throwing blaster shells down one after the other then flew down stomping on the dragon making the crater sink deeper into the Earth. Broly then stepped on Omega Shenron and grabbed his arm pulling it out of socket then tossing him by this same arm. Omega easily popped it back in place. This fight was not over yet.

Vegeta woke up rubbing his head, seeing it was night time. Goku woke up soon afterwards. Super Buu started reforming too. Vegeta jumped to his feet though. Super Buu finished coming back and yawned. "These have been he worst few days I can remember." Vegeta yells. He power up into a Super Sayain 4. "I'm through with all of you! Final Shine! Super Buu is obliterated completely by SS4 Vegeta's green beam.

Omega Shenron is flying away at top speed and Broly is right behind him. They fly so fast that they enter a part of Earth where the sun's still up but Broly can’t keep up the Super Saiyan 4 though and drops back to his normal form. "This was only a matter of time; I knew you couldn't handle it yet." "We can just fine though." Omega Shenron turned around to see Goku and Vegeta both in SS4. The ultimate rematch was about to begin.

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Both Goku and Vegeta drop out of SS4 and sit exausted. "Whew that's done, now what happened to that other guy?" Goku asked. "He gave us seven days to try and find him or Earth is destoyed" Vegeta answered. "Oh so we didn't win yet." Goku said. "I can't sense him so he must be too far away to instant transmit too. We might have to find a new place to live."

"You still have six days why are you giving up?" King Kai was talking in their heads again. "He's really close he's just hiding his power, just like you he sinks he's playing some game" "Where is he then?" Vegta yells. "Planet Immega, Goku remember where that was" Kai asked. "Yeah I think" "Good go there." "Alright let me get some sensu beans first we should be at 100%" "Kakarot, I went back on it against the dragon but this time I mean it no more fusing. That’s exactly what he wants us to do."

At Goku gets a sack full of sensu's at Korin's tower and he's about to teleport when Broly comes flying up. Vegeta is annoyed at this. "Freak don't you have a box to go back to?" "Actaully he's really strong, we could use all the help we can get." Goku tosses Broly a sensu bean. "I just want to destroy him even if it means fighting with Kakarot." The three Saiyans all teleport to planet Immega.

Nightmare was already at the spot they appeared at. It was the planet's capital city of Don Kee's country. Most of it was in ruins and the people had all been slaughtered. "You're early, hurry up and do that dance thing." He points a finger at Broly "I'll take you later." "No now you'll bow to the prince of all Saiyans." Vegeta turn Saiyan 4 and rushes Nightmare but he gets slapped away sliding across the ground on his face until he hits a mountain. “You can’t feel my power can you other wise you’d know alone you are too weak.” Goku was thinking about all the dead on the planet and his eyes began to glow green. “It’s not always about power levels. Let me show you.” Goku’s hair turned golden and sparks flew around his body.

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"You can't beat me like that." Nightmare said as Broly fell. All his wounds givene to him by the two were healing. He flew into the air rising to make another blast to blow up the planet when he saw Broly had disapeared. Broly grabbed Nightmare from behid and dove

down hard into the surface. He didn't let go and kept going driving them both deep underground until Nightmare powered up and broke Brolys hold. They were now in underground catacombs. "Your time is up." Broly laughed powering up into Super Saiyan 4 "Just let yourself peacefully get killed." "It doesn't matter how much you power up I'm still stronger!" Nightmare responded.

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SS4 Broly grabbed Nightmare by the throat with one hand and made a blater shell with the other. He let go and hit him with the blaster shell blasting Nightmare back to Immega's surface. Broly bursted through the ground grabbing Nightmare by the face this time. He the flew around laughing before coming into a spiraling dive, slamming the other legendary Sayian so hard against the ground it caused earth quakes that further destroyed the capitol city. The quake also woke up Goku and Vegeta who immediately also turned Super Saiyan 4.

Broly was punching Nightmare while he was on the ground but got kicked away the Nightmare then blasted Broly into the sky showing he had plenty of fight left. Broly responded by throwing barrage of blaster shell back down at him which but he took all the hits and managed to stay standing. They both laughed at each other thinking they had it won. Nightmare standing on the ground made a huge blaster shell and threw it at Broly above him who countered with the same attack.

The two green energy spheres pushed against each other but Nightmare's was pushing harder. Both put more energy into their attacks, Broly's blaster shell was getting pushed back toward him. SS4 Goku flew next to SS4 Broly and helped out with a x10 Kamehameha. The red beam push the blaster shells back toward Nightmare but only for alittle while. He still had more energy to put into his he screamed and the ground was cracking under his feet. Both Broly and Goku were starting to lose the power struggle. "Hey Vegeta come help." Goku yelled. "Fine, FINAL FLASH!"

Nightmare still had more and poured all he had into his blaster shell his feet broke into earth under them untill he was standing in a crater. "Give up your finished" Broly yelled at him. When SS4 Vegeta's attack joined the combo though his blaster shell was broken through he was completely vaporized by Goku, Vegeta and Broly. Unfortunately all the released energy also broke planet Immega into a thousand pieces.

The three Saiyans floated in space inside Broly's protective bubble looking at the asteroid field that was once planet Immega. They were all in their base forms exausted. "I think we over did it?" asked Goku. "Everyone was who lived there was probably dead or dieing." said Broly. "Still" Goku said. "Shut up Kakarot" Said Vegeta. "If we didn't do it our planet would of been destroyed and he would of blow up this one anyway."

"That's the first time you called the Earth your planet I think" teased Goku. "I though I told you to shut up Kakarot" Vegeta smacked him on the head. "Owe, oh I'm hungry." "Me too" said Broly. "Getting back home more import than your stomachs" Vegeta said. "Yeah I don't have enough energy for instant transmission." Goku wined and his and Broly's stomachs growled."

On the Supreme's Kai's planet he and the old Kai look at the three Saiyans from the crystal ball. "Do you think I should help them?" asked Supreme Kai. "Later" answered the old Kai. "When are thse to guys you invited from H.F.I.L(or H3ll) coming? Super Buu and Omega Shenron suddenly appeared on the great Kai's planet.

Buu laughed "Ha you died heheheh HAHAHA loser." So did you." he answered but Buu kept laughing yeah but you went out like a punk. They were letting you take free shots! "He kept laughing causing Omega Shenron to attack him. "See I told you this would happen.” said old Kai.

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Buu stood over Omega Shenron’s fallen body beating his chest. Supreme Kai snapped his fingers sending them back to h3ll. “Now that that’s done you should go pick those three up before Vegeta decides to blow himself up again.” said old Kai as he looked through his crystal ball.

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