Nice start. Just remember to post the other parts as replise to this one UNLESS there is danger of it getting pushed of the page in a post or 3. Nowutimeen? ;o)

lol, this story's good! plz post another part soon ;) im dying to see what becomes of Swindul Mars :P

It was soon 12:00 am. Everyone was asleep. I was very musty and hot. I smelled very bad. I had a headache from thinking hard for the last 9 hours. I didnt know what to do. I could forget about all of this and keep livving my life the way it is.

I walked out to infront of my house and thought about what just went through my mind. "I could forget about all this and keep livving my life...The way it is." I said as tears went down my eyes.

"Or you can step up and stop waiting for someone to change things for you." a voice behind called.

It was my wife. She must of heard me talking to my friends about this hours before. My wife was a young Imperial women who had a natural beauty to her. She was 36 years old, 6 years younger than me, and her name was Quyn. She was a cheerful lady livving a bad life. But still, al least she thought she was livving a good one.

"Derith. Please go. Travel to Leyawin and capture that damned outlaw. Gold or no gold, just promise me you will come back." she said with a frown on her face. Soon she went back to her happy personality. "But if you cant come back, promise me he wont either."

And that I promised. I gathered my Iron Shortsword and Steel Dagger. I walked into the castle gates of Bruma nervous but determined. As I walked up the first steps I was greeted by a guard.

"Are you interested in capturing Swindul Mars? If you are go to the Fighter's Guild immedietly. Theres a group of people there now about ready to leave to Leyawin for this task. Once your there they will give you a badge that shows your working with the government. It will allow you to get anything you'll need for your trip right now free. They will wait, but not for long so hurry."

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Part 3

As I walked into the Fighter's Guild I was greeted by 5 people.

Gro-Boks, a huge Orc with muscles as big as the armor he was wearing. He was very ignorant and rude, making me want to draw my blade to him. The only thing that stopped me was that he said he would burn my house down again and use my wife as a slave. So he was the one. The reason why I live more poor than ever. But not for long. Gro-Boks was wearing Steel Armor and was using a enchanted Fire Claymore. Gro-Boks was the leader of this group.

Hides-His-Blade, a young and fierce Argonian that seemed nice and loyal. The perfect man to trust. As I stared at him he was arguing to Gro-Boks about why not to eat the horses. "Its gonna be a long trip you no-brain". he said. Hides-His-Blade was dressed in Glass Armor and used a Glass Dagger. He had a set of arrows on his bas, about 20. He obviously was some sort of archer too.

John Dame, a quiet and calm Redguard warrior who retired from a Blade years ago. He was old, but he still looked like he wasnt the type to mess with. He was dressed in Orcish armor and used an Ebony Longsword.

Nikisha, a Imperial women Mage. She was very nice and kind, she reminded me of my wife. She was a master in all types of magic. She was very young and beautiful. She was wearing a pure white robe and hood. She had no weapon with her except her hands.

Miracle, a Dark Elf warrior that seemed strangely nervous. He refused to talk to anyone that day. I guess it was because he thought the same way I did. But still, he didnt feel as if he could do it. He shaked in fear as he drunk Ale and ate bread loafs.

Gro-Boks gave me by badge some minutes later and I went off in every direction looking for stores that have the supplies I need. Since it was 12:00, on every normal days most doors would be locked. Since the countess commanded that the doors should be open because of this task, I was able to get in and take anything I want.

I ran across a Nord who was a master forger. I took a full set of Elvin Armor and left the shop. Next, I went to a weapon shack. I took an Elvin Longsword and a backup Steel Dagger. I left that shop as well.

When I came back to the Fighter's Guild everyone was walking out. I knew what was going on. We were just about to leave. We left opened the gates to wildlife and there stood 6 horses waiting for us. One was dressed in Orcish Horse Armor.

"Phhh. That spoiled Orc." I whispered.

All the other horses seemed to be out of shape and old. We got on them, double checked out supplies, and walked down the road.

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Part 4